Score: 9

"great idea"

submission: DBR - opening

date: March 8, 2009

the only thing I have to critque is the fact thatin the last DBGT movie ever made.. Son goku looked to be the main character if they were to continue a series because Pan was a grandma.. and very old in that movie and Son Goku was searching for his great-grandpas 4star DragonBall.. So I think they would do another Dragonball type series just with people like Vegeta,Gohan,Goten and trunks in it since saiyans dont age..

But yours was a good idea and nicely drawn out.. I look forward to seeing your actuall episodes if you plan to make any

Score: 9

"to Killer731"

submission: DBZ - Gohan Kills Cell

date: March 8, 2009

Technically it was cell smashing Android 16's face which cause his power to slip because he was an android who loved life... so yeah

anywho.. towards your flash...

The drawing was simply amazing... very nicely done.. I loved the over lay of the original voice overs in the movie.. the ONLY thing I did not like was the Kamahameha was in the Japanese cartoons which I find their voices annoying but over all very nicely done with this

Score: 10

"this is awesome"

submission: Arrival In Hell

date: September 12, 2008

it reminded me alot of maniac mansion with the clues and only talk to, use, and grab options.. NES was the system and maniac mansion was a badass game.. this is the modern version of it and its awesome.. job well done

Score: 8

"Nicely done"

submission: **Insomnia**

date: August 17, 2009

The Intro was so badass and then it stopped... your piano work is beautiful sounding... When the drums come in... you should have kept the piano part in and then gone into the next transition... the techno part of this song is severely lacking.... It sounds empty through out the whole end of the song.. you need a lot of layers in this song because the beginning has tons of delay and reverb.. but the techno part comes in and it sounds very dull and just cut off...

You have good ideas... but you need to work more on the "techno" parts of this song... even if you dont have great plugins you can still make good sounds with only a parametric eg and Reverb or chorus which almost any daw program has...
try and learn how to transition the pieces better and this song will be incredible.. I herard 0 buildups in the song itself and if its a techno song then here has got to be buildups.. they dont have to be crazy like a normal buildup.. just a burst in energy somewhere throughout the changing pieces... buildups help tremendously in techno.. look into that and making your own sounds..

Score: 8

"sounds good"

submission: Earsex [Omega4.5]

date: July 18, 2009

I like it... the sounds are nice together.. the only i dont like however is this song is really repetitive.. I understand its a house tune but there needs to be some variation in it like extra layers or a new bassline.. or some counter melody going on or something of that sort... I think i could work on that..

other than that I like it...
5/5 8/10

Please give my new song "Club BDub" a listen to and review

Score: 9

"great"

submission: Eurodancer - DjM

date: July 6, 2009

I understand you said you were just trying to re-create the song and not add anything new so I wont hold that against like the rest of the idiots on here who dont know how to read... As far as the producing part goes I find it very well...

-The kick drum is at that perfect level.. it doesnt mesh with the bass or other sounds... great job with that.

-All of your sounds are at good levels the piano,synth and bass are good... it seems to me like when the synth goes higher that you actually lowered the volume on it to make it sound the same level.. most people dont understand higher parts cut through more and seem louder.. good job with that

-Theres only 1 thing I critique in this and its a small personal opinion... I think the claps could be louder and have some more reverb in them.. Alot of people say that the Kick is the most important piece in a Dance song.. I think the claps/snare drums are just as equally important seeing as how people need something to go bye to dance.. and when they hear a louder beefier clap they know where they are in the song and its easier to groove to...

All and All Brilliant rewrite... Nice Mixing and Mastering.... Great sounding Synths...
9/10 5/5

Keep it up..
if you have the time Id appreciate it if you reviewed some of my work.. Ive been following you since youve been doin collabs with DJPINKe.... hes kinda like my mentor.. he helped me alot if where I am today