nice
very nice and mellow sounding. everything is all connecting and smooth. only thing is i would take out a little reverb. it sounds like ur playing in the grand canyon. take some reverb to hear the pan flute a little better. but all and all it is a beautiful piece
could be better
I like where your going and tryin to bring back the old rock. But your song reminds me alot of Ac/Dc material because you only used about 4-5 chords total in the whole song and alot of 8th notes. try to create moving lead lines behind the 8th notes to give the song more kick. I understand rock rhythms are hard. I play guitar as well. just try to give it more of a lead line instead of accented 8th note rhythms.
yeah thats what i was goin for was the ac dc sound but the full version will be a lot better like the quiet portions will have a drum beat going on and i was thinking of a way to bring in some bar chords to change it up and add some strummimg cause the whole song was mostly just down strokes
awesome
kinda makes me want to cry. very good job. nice sad sound but yet happy feel to it. very very good job
damn
damn dude. i cant believe your 12 and already making music like this. I wish i could do this when i was 12. I cant remember what i did when i was 12 but damn bro. you got some skills. I personally dont like this type of music but its awesome sounding
this one is better
I personally like this version better. the breakdown sounds alot better than the guitar solo you put in the 2ns version. I love that breakdown. It sounds old/modern rockish but its played in a metal style if that makes any sense. but either way it sounds fucking awesome lol
great
im really diggin this right here. you used the best sounding instruments together and you added a new beat or loop every phrase or 4 measures some where were 2 measures and i wasnt expecting it. so thats a good loop right there. the way i see making music is that you have to make the people happy not so much yourself. so if the tune gets boring then no one likes it unless its just a cool riff u can listen to over and over for ex Sandstorm. Idk if you have heard that song but it has the catchiest riff that I could listen to over and over. very well made bro. keep it up
Thanks, dude. I'm glad you liked it so much. The whole idea of the song was to make a ridiculous 80's theme song for a cop show. I thought GroovePD would be a fitting name. Too bad, I never got to finish this one.
OWWW!
goddamn dude. you blew my ear drums out. your song is great but jesus great learn how to set levels in a song. the guitar solo is so fucking loud it makes it sound like shit. The rhythm guitar and drums sound awesome but god turn down that lead. i know lead guitar is above rhythm and drums but damn not that much above
lyrics
I understand its meant to have lyrics over it but its still quite boring. The drum beat never changes and you just add new instruments every now and then. try to get a set intro,verse,chorus,verse,chorus,bridg e,chorus,outro pattern type going. cause that drum beat drives me up the wall lol. but all in all with lyrics it would sound alot better. I write songs on guitars with a drum machine and they sound empty so i know about the not haveing singing in a song. thats y i started making techno songs
My Fruity Loops is a demo, so I have an ongoing problem of getting stuck with unfinished songs. This one is severely unfinished, but I felt it had enough integrity to at least be uploaded. I realize the repetitiveness, but I had an overall idea for the song lyrically that seemed to fit the beat. I just never got around to recording some vocals for it.
new instrument
im not a big fan of the rhythm instrument sound you have going in. the synth bass i believe that comes in during mid of the riff is pretty cool but Id say change the instrument or pad your using
The pad could use a little mastering. It's overall quality is lacking. Then again, I really threw this loop together. I should have spent a little more time getting all the layers right. Thank you for your feedback.
wow
dude I love your melodies and lead lines you come up with in this song. they make me feel all tingly and shit lol
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