Mushroomhead18nc's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Irreplaceable Dream]

Damn

damn dude. Im liking this alot. Im not big into R & B or rap but this is some good shit. The only thing i would say on the bad side. is too lower the hi-hat level in the beginning when only the piano i guess is playing and then bring the lvl back up when your other instruments enter. some good shit here man. keep it up

Hyperion666 responds:

YES i got another good review from u i feel special now yay thnx this is a remake of Darkening hope it has a weird story behind it too long to tell really but it was really creepy haha deals with an ex fiance of mine.

[We Are the Night]

Its good but could be better

I will be honest. the drums never change but i undersatnd your just writing something there so its not empty and dull so i can look past that. The singer doesnt appeal to me. however further into the song when you do a harmony thing with the voices, it gets better. The guitar track on the other hand is flawless, except the solo needs some work on the smoothness area. but all in all its a groovy and listenable solid hard rock tune. cant wait to hear more from you

Nessbeatsfox responds:

Thanks for the review!

This song was never meant to be perfect. I just threw it down cause it sounded good, but since it seems to be doing pretty well, I plan to rerecord it at a professional level (as professional as I can get it anyway). Thanks for listening!

[The Alliance]

no. no, no

the horns dont lie up at all with the song and if its possible u need to set the levels of your drums cause when the bass drum or low floor tom idk which comes in its all i hear is that and it sounds like george of the jungle. find a better instrument to use or even take out the drums in this piece and it would probally sound better

JakeAlexisSteele responds:

Hmmmm...I thought something sounded weird. I'm messing around with some different instruments right now...some them don't sound too bad...I'll keep at it and see what I can do...

- Jake Alexis Steele

[rock demo 1.0]

could be better

I like where your going and tryin to bring back the old rock. But your song reminds me alot of Ac/Dc material because you only used about 4-5 chords total in the whole song and alot of 8th notes. try to create moving lead lines behind the 8th notes to give the song more kick. I understand rock rhythms are hard. I play guitar as well. just try to give it more of a lead line instead of accented 8th note rhythms.

stupidman173 responds:

yeah thats what i was goin for was the ac dc sound but the full version will be a lot better like the quiet portions will have a drum beat going on and i was thinking of a way to bring in some bar chords to change it up and add some strummimg cause the whole song was mostly just down strokes

[GroovePD]

great

im really diggin this right here. you used the best sounding instruments together and you added a new beat or loop every phrase or 4 measures some where were 2 measures and i wasnt expecting it. so thats a good loop right there. the way i see making music is that you have to make the people happy not so much yourself. so if the tune gets boring then no one likes it unless its just a cool riff u can listen to over and over for ex Sandstorm. Idk if you have heard that song but it has the catchiest riff that I could listen to over and over. very well made bro. keep it up

FattyOPatty responds:

Thanks, dude. I'm glad you liked it so much. The whole idea of the song was to make a ridiculous 80's theme song for a cop show. I thought GroovePD would be a fitting name. Too bad, I never got to finish this one.

[PV-GS39]

lyrics

I understand its meant to have lyrics over it but its still quite boring. The drum beat never changes and you just add new instruments every now and then. try to get a set intro,verse,chorus,verse,chorus,bridg e,chorus,outro pattern type going. cause that drum beat drives me up the wall lol. but all in all with lyrics it would sound alot better. I write songs on guitars with a drum machine and they sound empty so i know about the not haveing singing in a song. thats y i started making techno songs

FattyOPatty responds:

My Fruity Loops is a demo, so I have an ongoing problem of getting stuck with unfinished songs. This one is severely unfinished, but I felt it had enough integrity to at least be uploaded. I realize the repetitiveness, but I had an overall idea for the song lyrically that seemed to fit the beat. I just never got around to recording some vocals for it.

[Space Chunnel]

new instrument

im not a big fan of the rhythm instrument sound you have going in. the synth bass i believe that comes in during mid of the riff is pretty cool but Id say change the instrument or pad your using

FattyOPatty responds:

The pad could use a little mastering. It's overall quality is lacking. Then again, I really threw this loop together. I should have spent a little more time getting all the layers right. Thank you for your feedback.