Owww
Ideas are good.. It sound alot better without the shitty guitar plugin.. sounds like a sytrus plugin.. ne who I can forgive that.. If it where on a real guitar it would sound amazing.. One thing though I believe the speed is way too damn fast.. are you trying to achieve Slayer here??
Another thing is TURN DOWN THE VOLUME.... my ears are bleeding and your clipping ALOT which makes the song itself sound like shit..
You have good ideas and good metal background.. but you need to learn to master a little better.. also dont add so many instruments in at one time... some of the best tunes are composed from a little selection of instruments.. like when you go to the strings thats cool and when you combine the strings and guitar thats good.. but w/e that high pitched thing was kinda ruined it..
like I said though you need to get rid of the clipping because no one will listen past 10seconds of your song because High Frequencies are annoying by themselves and the louder your song is makes them even more annoying.. so try to master this song and then repost it.. I guarantee you will have a higher score
-Mushroomhead18nc