dude
dude you have the right idea. but man you need to study up on musical knowledge and theory. You have the right sounds and right instruments for a decent techno song but your doing so many off time beats that it makes the song sound like crap even though there is a steady drum beat behind it, you cant just off beat everything. The ending sounds alot better than the intro. because its actually synched with the drums some what but learn how to better arrange your songs instead of jush pusing random buttons and using random notes and for gods sake please pick one key signature and stick with it. and your jumping like 3octaves at a time at the end. that doesnt good. if you want any help on music knowledge then send me a pm and well talk. you got the spirit but not the right stuff yet